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In a crooked little town, they were lost and never found
Fallen leaves, fallen leaves, fallen leaves on the ground
Run away before you drown, or the streets will beat you down
Fallen leaves, fallen leaves, fallen leaves on the ground
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Critique by !Wolfadoptables25 Jun 19, 2012, 9:51:51 AM
ou could have made his markings not move but i know thats hard. I have 1 question: is he running on the water or running out of the water? Other than those things this is one of the best i have seen. I recomend copying and re-pasting the markings when trying to make it smooth. It works really well because I have done it on my animations to. The rocks could have had a little more detail though. And you might want to add a little shading too. Other than that ITS SO AWESOME!!!!!! Keep up the AWESOME work!! Wolfadoptables25
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Critique by !strandedcat Jun 16, 2012, 3:17:20 PM
I think you could've made some of his markings not move, and the animation a little bit smoother, but other then that i like it . And maybe the background a little more detailed then what looks like a cave and a tiny pool of water? Anyway, I really do like it, even though when he runs his claws suddenly came out, and I thought that was a little strange but I guess that a cat has to has his claws unsheathed in able to run. Other then that, it's really nice! Keep animating! (: Okay, it gave me that weird little error thing so I'm just gonna keep talking. A little more... a little more... alright, there. Stranded out.
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*DerpyPaws Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Was this a scene from Hollyleaf's Story?
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!Reikiemery Jun 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I don't know, I don't have the book
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*DerpyPaws Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's an E-book
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!Reikiemery Jun 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Okay?
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*DerpyPaws Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I read it, it's a really good book.
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!Reikiemery Jun 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I can't yet cause i haven't finished the second series
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!Wolfadoptables25 Jun 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
The new prophecy? Im reading Moonrise.
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*DerpyPaws Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm rereading the whole series, they're such great books
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!Reikiemery Jun 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah
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